I am preparing text for an e mail to many dealers in the North Texas area. This is a request for a price on factory ordering the car I want.
I would appreciate any constructive feedback or suggestions. I am hoping this will also be helpful to other members here who are considering a purchasing approach to buying a new Murano. Thanks in advance!
Here is a working version:
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Attention FLEET MANAGER ONLY.
I would like to factory order the following car:
Nissan Murano 2004. SL AWD. Super Black exterior, Café Latte Leather Interior, Touring Package, Vehicle Dynamic Control, Factory Installed Navigation System (NOT dealer installed aftermarket), XM Satellite Radio, Bose Stereo System, Alloy Wheels (NOT Chrome), and Tow Package.
I also request that you would direct the factory’s attention to avoiding possible window rattles as well as Alternator problems.
I will also consider a car already on the ground with the following:
2004 model. Super Black, Café Latte Leather Interior, Touring Package, Vehicle Dynamic Control, Factory Installed Navigation System (NOT dealer installed aftermarket).
E mail me with your rock bottom HONEST price quote, with approximate ETA
NO GAMES. NO ADD ONS. DO NOT CALL ME. I will NOT come in to your dealership to “discuss” anything. Don't waste my time and I won't waste yours.
I will be sending this e mail request to many dealerships in the North Texas area and beyond. The lowest price, along with subsequent contract FAXED to me for my perusal, will get my business. “ My business” means that I will come in personally and sign the faxed contract and lay down a deposit of $500.
Fleet manager contact me by E Mail ONLY.
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I would appreciate any constructive feedback or suggestions. I am hoping this will also be helpful to other members here who are considering a purchasing approach to buying a new Murano. Thanks in advance!
Here is a working version:
<start of letter>
Attention FLEET MANAGER ONLY.
I would like to factory order the following car:
Nissan Murano 2004. SL AWD. Super Black exterior, Café Latte Leather Interior, Touring Package, Vehicle Dynamic Control, Factory Installed Navigation System (NOT dealer installed aftermarket), XM Satellite Radio, Bose Stereo System, Alloy Wheels (NOT Chrome), and Tow Package.
I also request that you would direct the factory’s attention to avoiding possible window rattles as well as Alternator problems.
I will also consider a car already on the ground with the following:
2004 model. Super Black, Café Latte Leather Interior, Touring Package, Vehicle Dynamic Control, Factory Installed Navigation System (NOT dealer installed aftermarket).
E mail me with your rock bottom HONEST price quote, with approximate ETA
NO GAMES. NO ADD ONS. DO NOT CALL ME. I will NOT come in to your dealership to “discuss” anything. Don't waste my time and I won't waste yours.
I will be sending this e mail request to many dealerships in the North Texas area and beyond. The lowest price, along with subsequent contract FAXED to me for my perusal, will get my business. “ My business” means that I will come in personally and sign the faxed contract and lay down a deposit of $500.
Fleet manager contact me by E Mail ONLY.
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